[ QUOTE ] What did you use to render that coffee cup scene? Is it composited at all? Really nice job in any case and cool prop and vehicle designs. [/ QUOTE ] tnxs man. About the coffe scene its mayas mental ray with a HDRI image. No compositing as im aware of
nice ironhawk, however I find myself looking a lot more at the cliff than the lighthouse . perhaps the composition doesn't bring attention to it strongly, but then its a very nice cliff
[ QUOTE ] you could use some more colour in the fonts , maybe try to make the eye follow the composition more on the layout ... other than that it looks great. [/ QUOTE ] lol!
pior: looks nice.. I'd do something about the shadows though, maybe more samples? You could always just render out a shadow pass seperately and blur/smudge out the shadows in photoshop/compositing package.
Thanks Noritsune - I agree with your points on the pose and composition. I think the clouds need shifting to the left and toning down a little. I like your 'overlay-over'(tm?) and certainly want to have similar lighting effects in the finished piece.
The composition is a bit strange SF. The angle of the head vs the angle of the left arm is a bit off, and the closed eyes make it even more strange looking. I would suggest that you either open the eyes and alter the angle of the head as if she was pointing and looking somewhere, or that you alter the left arm to a pose…