well, I can think of two big things to comment on; 1. does the katana have distal taper? Many 3D artists model swords as if they were cut from a flat sheet of metal; you want distal taper. 2. Is the cross-section of the katana grip oval or perfectly round? You want an oval cross-section for edge alignment. other than that…
Great work on production and stylization. I really appreciate the craftmanship. My biggest issue with the render is the lighting. Specifically the value focal points is falling off the page. It's ok to have the breasts be the focal point but then you need to frame to that focal point. And it's impossible to give the image…