That all sounds great, I can not wait to see it. :) I spoke to Belisarius Cawl the Adeptus Mechanicus Tech-priest today and he said! "By the Omnissiah’s sacred gears and the holy rites of the Machine Spirit, I consecrate this message to @jbeck3d. May your cogitators hum with flawless precision, your circuits burn with…
Very nice :) this has a solid and clear story beat, and the scene has a
great foundation. As you continue refining it, consider pushing the secondary
storytelling details further. Adding personal items—such as photos, handwritten
notes, or scattered everyday tools—could hint at who lived here and deepen the
narrative.…