HI! I would start off by saying that your lighting does not look dreadful! Unfortunately sometimes when people are making YouTube videos they will leave out important information such as post processing changes, or shaders which can heavily impact the final results of a shot. For me the biggest thing that's sticking out in…
Thank you this is some really great feedback. I'm going to widen the path and try cutting away the trees behind the building to add contrast and see if that leads the eye better. I think the tutorial I watched was pretty good for not skipping stuff but when he was messing around with shadow and colour values he knew…