Ahh, Okay *cracks fingers & stretches* whatever is going on from 0:06 - to 0:08 is strange without any context if it was supposed to be some sort of anomalous interference it didn't work on me, it looked odd & bother some. 0:17(strong wobble for me) the start of the effect is too strong for me, its alright but i felt it…
Hello thank you :) I appreciate that ^^ all the aspects you described for sure also bugged me , so I agree , I always look for an external "advice" to improve so thank you for pointing the issues for the part that bothered you, yeah it's an easy fix in montage but indeed in real life what happens it that you have a "metro…