Thanks for the feedback. Thing is, I have someone who made this as a concept. He is not my friend but his artwork is good: Probably should have shared the concept right from the start. I already deviated here and there, in general I believe it is one of these things where art is higly subjective.
Maybe material selection could've helped more here? the materials look very similar except for the pieces that are obviously more reflective, but personally i thought the yellower pieces (especially the large front piece) seemed more smoother surface wise and a different material. I think my only other thing would be maybe…
Jeah I think the Materials might shine a bit more under a different light setting. The current one is kinda smooth and does not show many of the nouances in the material roughness. I might add another shot out of an unreal scene that does a better job at this. Overall I did not follow the concept 100% because certain…