The concept and design give desert oasis vibes, which I think is being hurt by the type of foliage outside and the blue sky from the overhead shot. The scene is just too hazy and kinda kills the vibes of the concept, something like this looks closer to the concept and feels better for the scene.
Hi! Cool that you keep chipping away at this scene! Some thoughts: Lighting-wise, scene is a bit swallowed by the volumetric fog. In the concept the light comes in more from the top, sort of putting a spotlight on the center and the indirect lighting seems to be stronger. I think re-lighting the scene with those aspects in…
looking good! you should put all updates into single thread that way its easier to follow. I assume the final image the concept. I think you mentioned you will tackle lighting soon, and that is where my major critiques would go. Compared to the concept yours is too dark. It is difficult to see much on both of my monitors.…