Kudos for progressing so far on this! The porcelain/glaze material looks great! Are you familiar with the japanese art (and i guess philosophy) of Kintsugi (mending broken pottery with gold)? It's just an idea, not a criticism. But it feels like it could be fitting from a narrative perspective. As for crit, it looks like…
I think most useful will be to do few simplify hands so you can commit to memory major forms and planes then will be easy to pose them the way you like Below is example with few different level of complexity , doent matter how simple actually is as long as you can learn forms and planes "To clarify, I've done all the hand…