Try something simpler like this: https://www.artstation.com/artwork/XB0aQR flat colors, geometric shapes, no details just silhouettes of the main subjects. each sketch should answer a simple question like, "where are we?" "who is the hero?" "what is happening?" "what time is it?" "what era is it?" etc
Ah ok, I didn't see the images before. I think currently the sketches are hard to read. You could fill in shapes in an image editing program to increase readability. Regarding shots, you could do a more loose, zoomed out shot that describes mood and large structures, maybe a cross section of the layers. A single…
I believe the sketches are currently challenging to read. To improve readability, you could add fill to shapes in an image editing programme. You could use a looser, zoomed-out shot to describe mood and significant structures, perhaps showing a cross section of the layers. one house, building, or column to demonstrate the…