Thank you for your feedback. I see what you mean with the septum, it's a bit too flat on the underside. I am flustered about the body proportions though? In what way are they wrong you mean? The body is 8 heads tall, and I am aware she is a bit on the skinnier side, and Im going for the more narrow hips kind of look, but…
Your character is a bit over 8 heads tall. Here's an example of a more 'standard' human proportions. Yours is almost a head taller but is super thin, making the for the stretched 'alien' look. Also, Notice the length of the torso in comparison to the length of the legs. Your character has super long legs. It's more…