This is super cool, I've never read the books so take this with any comments with a pinch of salt if they go against the source. I would say the overall light on the bridge could do with being a bit more contrasty, maybe the text and line streaks could be the brightest points. Think this would give the bridge a more…
Hello everyone! I used the feedback and this is my new
result. Any feedback about this new result is welcome! I played with the thickness map to put an inner glow on the
bridge, but I tried to ground the bridge so it looked like a glowing glass
bridge and not a hologram. I played with the fog and lights to try and…
@Pirax You should check out the book from your local library! It’s
one of my favorite books that I have ever read. I did want the bridge to steal
all the thunder in this shot 😊 The source material opens with a glass
bridge and shows you what elderglass is in this world and that is what I tried
to capture in this scene. I…
stefanWilliams_C Thank you! I was trying to make it feel very noisy and closed in. i was looking at Rio de Janeiro and Ganvie Lake Village shanties for ideas of how to build the scene. I can work with the lighting to strike a balance. I am trying to make the scene dark enough that the bridge catches your eyes, but yet have…
I really like it so far, I think you've nailed the 'living elbow to elbow' part! The environment feels closed in and claustrophobic, which I think is what you were going for? You could darken the skybox a little and perhaps play around with the emissive of the bridge, maybe increasing the glow intensity a bit. I also feel…