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Foxish animation - Feedback
Hey hi! I've been working on this animation for this foxish thing and I feel like something is not quite right, some parts feel a bit dull but I'm not sure if it's just me. Help and critiques would be really appreciated! https://www.syncsketch.com/playground/a19f9ac0795d40eda23d147fdb9f10e7#1088877/1018041 -
Re: Foxish animation - Feedback
This is looking much better! * Thanks for calling me out on saying it should be "beautiful", hah. I was being lazy and non descriptive. What I should have said was, make sure the spacing and arcs are as smooth as possible, in order to push the floaty dreamy feel. Good example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0qnQqXr838E *… -
Re: Foxish animation - Feedback
Hey, just finished updating it! But first thank you so much, your advice is invaluable. I think I have fixed the timing of the areas you mentioned, they indeed seemed out of pace. I've also been adjusting the camera curves to get smoother motion. I don't completely get what you mean about making the flying part more… -
Re: Foxish animation - Feedback
This is cool! Since it's a stylized piece, take all my critique with a grain of salt since there's no "right" way to do things. Overall I think you need to choose how dreamy things are at each point in the piece and make sure the timing and overall style reflects that. I like the idea of it starting off not dreamy and then…
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