@jamecz Thanks for the critique! The cohesiveness of the colors in the scene is something I have been struggling with, and I really like your suggestion for the rug, I'll go ahead and try and tone it down to a more muted red. As for the walls texture, it is board formed concrete! So for this technique of pouring concrete,…
Ok long critique: The colors and textures throw me off. Overall, the colors just dont go together well. The original illustration has a more monochrome scheme that unifies the scene, while the colors here seem to be all over the place and non cohesive. Also, The rug looks too bright and too flat, my eye keeps getting drawn…