Started messing around with this dragon rig and made a pretty simple animation with it. The animation has no effects, but at the end of the animation the dragon is supposed to be breathing fire. I would appreciate any feedback and thanks in advance for looking at my work. I'll leave the link below.…
Thanks for the feedback. I have not had a lot of time to work on my animation, but I have done some cleaning up on it. As for the camera I moved it around, but it is not how I plan on leaving it. As always any feedback is appreciated. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/8e3bc55873ff/
Try to make some narrative or rhythm in your piece. It feels way too long, there are parts where the audience is literally waiting for the next move to happen. The start is too soft, make him look like he is bitting. Look at real animals eating, they are quite sharp on their movements to tear the flesh apart. Pose and arm…