Thanks a lot mate, none taken of course :) What you have said is 100% logical and right, and btw all these projects are pretty old now, I need to remake one final kickass project in order to publish it, and of course I will take all notes you gave me seriously, again thanks a lot :)
post your portfolio link right here in this thread and people will offer you feedback, many of them industry professionals. Or, go on artstation/linkedin and search for artists doing what you wanna do (environment/character etc) at studios where you would potentially want to work at, and send them a message through that…