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Re: [WIP] The Wailing Mountains
Reply by karefs · · Home› Contests & Challenges Archives› Riot Creative Contest 2017› Riot Creative Contest 2017 - Narrative- It seems like Daere has a plan all along. He knows that he’s not coming back, right? Still, we don’t know why he is there and what he is doing. At least I couldn’t figure out that part. - I agree with your lecturer. The last part of your story needs more explanation. - As for the length, you can easily trim the first… -
Re: [WIP] The Wailing Mountains
Reply by sfydmr60 · · Home› Contests & Challenges Archives› Riot Creative Contest 2017› Riot Creative Contest 2017 - NarrativeThe Wailing Mountains Two travelers came to the slope where two mountains met: “Alright Daere, this marks my end of the deal. Climb the fourth mountain and that’s it.” The woman had a longbow around her, and daggers just above her knees. She caught Daere measuring the mountain from top to bottom, still out of breath.…
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