Rough 1 905 words ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The sound of flesh on stone reverberated for only a moment before fading from the alleyway, but in Talon’s ears it echoed like cannon fire; he’d been sloppy this time. Only…
Mostly made some minor wording edits. I also removed all the semicolons. If Rough 2 looks good I'm gonna go ahead and make this into a pdf. Again, please be harsh with me so I may learn. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Rough 2 917 words…
Okay. All done, I think. All that's left is to make it into a pdf. -"That would cut down on the questions he'd need to ask" doesn't make a whole lot of sense in this context; Delilah knowing who her attacker is wouldn't change the questions TALON would be asking. -Title added - "To Serve Noxus" -Rearranged some lines on…