The face looks like it's gone through an incredible upgrade! Her knees, neck, and back anatomy all really seem to look more on point as well. Really awesome start so far, @karytsukino. Looking forward to seeing your updates
Ok, I did some paintovers. Again, I'm not the greatest anatomy expert so take these with a grain of salt. To me, the crotch and butt seem a little high with the gap between her legs being quite large. I would drop the crotch a tad, and give her inner thighs more mass. I can understand keeping her thin but with the overall…