looking cool! very strong stylization. I think you can shift some frames from 0-17 to 30-45 to vary up the rythmn a bit. scribbled a few things on the syncsketch too, maybe a tough call given your camera view, what you have now reads better from camera, though I think it's a little weaker motion wise.
Thanks @Hito ! When you say "shift frames" do you mean take frames from 0-17 (speeding it up) and add them to 30-45 (slowing it down)? I think rhythm is very important, but it might have gotten mushy while I was adding holds. Like you said about the camera, I'm still hesitant on it and trying to get angles that are…