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1. 3D Animation Pride and Prejudice Monologue Scene (Critique Welcome)

   

   

   Topic by ZeEsTaR · Dec 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hi there :) , Below is a Monologue scene from Pride and Prejudice produced as a University assignment, the mo-cap data and model were provided but all lip sync/animation and mo-cap edits are my own work. All critique is welcome :) Enjoy~ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SIwZ9geAmew Thank you for taking the time to watch it…

2. Re: 3D Animation Pride and Prejudice Monologue Scene (Critique Welcome)

   

   

   Reply by Arturow · Dec 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello ZeEsTaR :) Good work :) I have a couple of notes: - The hands feel that they are hitting the same poses at the same time , try to avoid that perfect symmetry. - The camera is a little bit weird with all those movements :P I don't know if the original scene was like that tho. - Try to add some "overlap" to the eyes,…

3. Re: 3D Animation Pride and Prejudice Monologue Scene (Critique Welcome)

   

   Reply by ZeEsTaR · Dec 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Thank you for the feedback and references Arturow <3 , and i fully agree with you on the cameras and lack of overlapping for the eyes especially at the end i don't really know what I was trying to accomplish with the last camera, seemed like it could of been a cool idea at the time but after re-watching it 4-5 times its…