Nice touch with the meta screenshot lol. I love the setup of this scene, though I did think the earlier shots had stronger compositions. A few other thoughts to apply to this or your next ventures, since you say you were pushing lighting and shading with this endeavor: Fabric - Firstly I thought the fabric was much more…
Very nice, impressed with the laptop and other props. There is some repeating scratch detail on the former though, and the plastic area beneath the window looks wierd.. light baked into the diffuse?