Thanks for your advice, I agree with you. I was feeling the same way towards the bricks and ceiling, but I wasn't sure. I'll have to redo those textures, as for the small scale objects, I will add those later. I changed the scene a little, I think the bed looks more like a focal point now.
I'll bullet point my critique for you :) - Too dark, can barely make out some of the details in your art. - No objects to indicate where the tints of red light source come from. The only place that indicates a source of light is the window. Either add something to justify the light source or adjust the light in a way it…