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Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey Adam, thanks for the feedback :) I'll look into it now! I know the animation is slow, I had originally sped it up in post, but I felt this better showed an area I knew to be lacking. Edit: I updated the sword animation looking through your pointers: https://youtu.be/CFsTwx2DoWY Edit2: I updated the animation again,… -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey Arturow, thanks so much for your comment! :) I'll definitely look at the examples you posted! I am indeed using full IK, as I don't really know how to do anything else. How do I use the 'motion trail'? I had already started a second animation when I saw your comment - originally he walks up to the pedestal, but if the… -
First animations - feedback requested!
Heya guys, Sorry I have to ask for help on my first post, but I don't really feel I have anything to contribute to other peoples threads yet. I am in the process of building an animation portfolio for an animation school here in Denmark (the Animation Workshop) by friday night, and I was curious as to which things you guys… -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey Adam! Thanks so much for your tips! :) I agree the headmovement looks weird - I was something I had looked at before, but couldn't really find anything then - I did manage to cancel out the ostrich-ness though. I think I included a frame too much the last time, but I also smoothed out the curves here.… -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey again guys :) I updated the walk-animation with the notes - thoughts? https://youtu.be/KSAE2SnVaJA -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hello Warbeard , welcome to the forum :D For your first attempt is very good! you have some of the basics there but it lacks some of the standard walk cycle poses. - Your character hips are too low , it should have a nice extension on every step from the hip to the feet ( It can vary from character to character but I'm… -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey man, for the sword grab I think you need to work on your timing and arcs. Here are a few things I noticed: 0:00 - Left leg pops as it bends, to avoid this don't start the pose with the leg fully stretched 0:01 - The movement into the grab seems very slow 0:01 - His wrist also looks broken at this point, bring his elbow… -
Re: First animations - feedback requested!
Hey man, definitely getting better! Here are a few more quick notes you might want to consider on your next pass. Sword Grab * His fingers are too straight before the grab, I'd give them a more natural curl with a bit of overlap. * His arm goes through his head as he lifts the sword * His shoulders / torso and hips on the…
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