Nice work! If you'd like feedback, first thing that pops to mind is to push your material definitions a little more. Brighter speculars on the metal, tighter value ranges on the tightpants of the elf, things of that nature. Try and make metal look like metal, wood look like wood, hair like hair, etc. Even when stylizing…
Looking good, Greg. Your anatomy knowledge is coming along nicely. Just be careful with how you place the breasts and breastplate. On the render above her breast are at her armpits, making the whole area look uncomfortable and unnatural. Also, she seems like she's a strong lady, and even slim women have definition…