looks cool but the material differientiation doesn't look right to me. Right now it reads like the whole thing is made of mud and has a layer of concrete on the outside. Damaged concrete would still has the color or concrete (but yes indeed you could add some dirt in it, but not plain dirt on every damaged surface). I hope…
it looks kinda weird, almost like the concrete is bending. there is no real visible crack or fracture that would show how the center of the pillar is bent like that without breaking away. the overall sculpting and details look nice, just the physics and realization look a bit off.