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1. Re: My Animation Showreel

   

   Reply by BenEdwards94 · Apr 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Hello! Thankyou very much for the feedback. This is a really helpful critique and I'm really happy that you responded. I'm definitely going to improve on these. The motion capture data in the monologue is a bit iffy, I must admit. Tried as much as I could within my deadline but yeah the hands are definitely a weakness in…

2. My Animation Showreel

   

   Topic by BenEdwards94 · Apr 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Responses are needed for my portfolio report :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dtyyM28QC1A

3. Re: My Animation Showreel

   

   Reply by 13randO · Apr 2016 · Home› Animation Showcase & Critiques

   Heya, Ben! Here's just a few things that I noticed after a few views of your demo reel: I noticed that many parts of Mathilda's face isn't expressive enough to make the dialogue convincing. For instance, when she says 'Hi', her face doesn't say anything. She doesn't seem happy or cheery, she mostly just stares blankly. I'm…