I put the work in progress because I'm passing it around to a few people before I render out the final version to submit as a demo. I wanted to make that clear just in case. Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm very proud of these animations and I see what you mean with everything you have stated. I will be making…
Hello everyone! :) It's time to update the old demo reel so I've been working hard on making new animations to reflect my growth as an animator. This is my first polish pass and I would greatly appreciate some feedback. http://vimeo.com/160962499
Great improvement from the first but I feel like the kick in the first animation lacks any force to be a damaging blow. You could try bring it around a little faster and letting the body follow through. I'm sure there's a ton of martial arts reference out there. Also, that staggering walk doesn't really drive home that…
Well, you've got some good stuff in here, but right away, I would toss your reel aside if I were hiring. Every single piece is listed as WIP. It's as if you never finish pieces. An instant red flag for employers. As for the animation, like I said. There's some good stuff in there. That said, each piece seems to have the…