Welcome to the forums. I like the image but you are right there are a ton of issues. Where is your light source? You should NOT be rendering until you know this. Try not to use a white background, it throws out your perception of value and means you can't have the illusion that anything is brighter than the background…
Hey thanks for the draw-over and breakdown! It really helped me understand the problems. I did not know about the tits and ass pose when i gestured this pose but since you pointed it out I realize that's why I felt it was not giving me a good feeling. So I decide to change it up a little with a ref I found. Hopefully it's…
Thanks for your response full of good pointers. You are right I did not think of the horizon line or light source when I started this piece. I've also changed the background and right away it's much easier to see overall. I'm a little confused as to where the horizon line should be for a character piece like this. I've…