Well I'm doing a superb job of keeping this up to date, here's my latest animation for University. I'm still playing around with it and could use some feedback on it please. https://www.syncsketch.com/sketch/113455#121997
So I'm back with another update, I made the suggestions by AGoodFella and pressed forward with getting the axe to rotate when it's in contact with the ground, I also played around with feet contacts. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/142760#167270
Thanks @AGoodFella, I appericate your feedback. I've made changes to my death and uploaded a new one critique welcome as ever, I need to move onto the next animation soon. Edit: would help if I put the link - https://syncsketch.com/sketch/113455#123852
I've been re-visiting my Uni work and trying to improve them, I've changed my ranged attack and would appreciate critique on it. I'm currently having trouble figuring out how to make the guns look like they are firing. https://syncsketch.com/sketch/140473#164372 (RangedattackS)
Thanks @slipsius ! I'll re-visit it now that I'm on my Christmas break, I'm really not happy with it, for now I'll get this last anim finished. Now I'm animating a walking animation with a few breaks in it, like pointing, waving etc. I want to get the walk cycle right before continuing and would appreciate any critique…
Hey guys I appreciate the critique, I'm going to re-do the animation or at the very least strip some of the break downs out and re-time, I made a very silly mistake of copying the timing of a death that was in slow motion, how I didn't notice I have no idea, I just wasn't thinking. This is my 3rd animation for my final…
Thanks Hito, I said thanks on SmearFrame but I'll say it again - thanks a lot. I decided to abandon that animation as I wasn't using proper reference. So here's an attempt at an attack cycle using reference from Rhinohouse. I have tried to push the poses and get him into a confident appearance, any critique is welcome,…
@Arturow thanks a lot! I applied all the critiques and thanks to the person who critiqued as a guest. I decided to push myself more and instead do a small scene consisting of walking, stopping, action etc instead of just a walk cycle with breaks. Sorry for wasting your time, I did apply the critiques though and learned…
Here is my combo attack so far, I had some awesome critique from some friends and on Smear Frame, I've changed it a lot since then. I tried to incorporate all of the critique but I wasn't sure how to go about getting a different arc for the axe swings, so they are still very similar, I'll film some ref later to see how…
Thanks @Hito I'm kind of bummed out now, I think I'm way too far in to properly apply what you and that video talked about but maybe I'll re-create it or something. I started another animation while I give the scene a little break, I wasn't happy with the death animation I created for University before, so I re-created it…