Hi Shade117 Pro, As Lotet mentioned it's a little easier to give constructive feedback if we know what style you're aiming for with the image. For example if you're going for a cel-shaded, Borderlands style like how you've done the eye lines then I'd consider lightening the nose bridge and lip lines a tad. Or else if…
Hi Shade117 pro, This latest image is already a lot better in terms of colour compared to the previous :) The colours of the shadows are nice and could even be a little darker near the tighter regions for a more pleasing ambient occlusion. In case you haven't already looked into ambient occlusion it's the regions where…