I'd focus on the lighting, It's pretty drab and by the numbers at this point. I'd watch a few tutorials, (turn off your glows) and get some lighting in there that looks good with just point lights and directional/ambient. Once you have something your happy with/have gotten polycount feedback on.....then you can turn on…
Sorry for my slow reply, I have been crazy busy in the past week. I revisited the lighting and turned off the glows. I haven't touched the hanging wires yet, I'll get to that after I find a lighting setup that works. Thanks for the feedback! Wasn't sure how to post images so I just used the built in file upload, I'll now…