Xiao, the expression and character portrayed in this piece is fun! I agree with Nick in regards to the flatness in the woman's face. She looks a bit like a doll. I can't help, but think of Chucky from Child's Play. :) The details in the ship are great. Keep up the great work!
Sorry for the late reply! Thanks for the feedback amirabd2130 and jhoythottle! @jhoythottle thanks for the tips on playing around with the scene! It was quiet fun moving stuff around, and be less restrictive with composition! I am sorta fan of the hair, since I wanted to go for a style around the 60-70s, but I understand…
The shot seems a little too staged. Something about it feels robotic. Maybe the characters poses are too stiff? Also, that girl's face seems really off to me. Have you thought about giving her a different hair style? Right now her frizzy hair and big eyes make her look like an 80s barbie doll. You need a new camera…