I agree with what's been said, the lion and last shot are your weakest peices, I do think you put your best work first, which is good. But er.... What happened to her sword at the end of the first shot?
Really cool stuff here. I agree with what people have said, last shot looks interesting but it's just too confusing for me to read at first. I for one do not like the big guy with the huge sword, it's sort of sliding across the ground when he turns and moves, has no weight. And the lion, it's too fast for it to be limping,…
Going to second slipius about the last shot, the half second focus at the end feels a bit too forced for my tastes. The only other shot that rubbed me a bit weird was the Lion walk cycle. The rest of your work is so fluid, that although stylized, it feels incorrectly twitchy. I am loving that purple hat, soooo floppy. Keep…
Thank you guys so much for the feedback! It seems it's time to kill the final shot lol. It's one of my older animations so it's no biggie just cutting it. I was debating if I should keep the walk cycles or not. What I've heard from my mentors is that it's better to have a really good 30 second demo reel than 2 minutes of…