I like some of what you've done, but there are some issues. I'll try my best not to reiterate what others have said, and simply add what I think could improve your scene. I will cover a few points that I think has room for improvement: - Forms - Colors - Lighting Forms: You have some interesting large forms and good shapes…
@Jack M >>> Thank you for the very thoughtful feedback and sorry for the super late reply. first, I will try to address a crit that comes up quite frequently, I'm not trying to say that you guys are wrong, but I will attempt here to make a case in favour of busy detailing. you guys may have heard of the circuit board…