Assani, I think your face proportions are off Her eyes, for instance, seems too small. Overall head shape is longer than it is in the concept. I'm not getting the same feel. The clothing wrinkles, especially on the arm, could use more care as to their origin of anchor and how they wrap aroun the arm as gravity pulls them…
@Francois_K: Ha, good point: I went ahead and fixed neck area. @PyZern: I made the hands a bit smaller. Also smoothed them some, but now that I look at it, they could use a bit more. :) I like the progress on your piece. The jacket needs some more bigger folds though. See, for example, the underlying tube-shape of the…