Nice start, there are a few issues I see holding back your work so far. I suggest trying to find as many reference images of her as possible. Photo shoots, paparazzi, performances, interviews, etc. I included a few bullet points as well as an image below to expand on a few issues. 1. The front of the face and bridge of the…
I'm definitely not a character artist or any decent judge on anatomy, but her eyes seem just a wee bit too far apart and her nose tip seems smaller than the reference image. It might be easier to compare if you mimicked the lighting a bit closer between your model and the reference -- otherwise I have nothing. Looks pretty…
I posted a quick and dirty Photoshop job with the liquify tool below. The biggest adjustment was made to the eyes, nose and overall head shape. These are a few alterations I think can help the overall piece. I also added a few more reference pictures to help with the process. Also here is a link to a webinar on the head by…
The lip area looks a lot better now. The brows and the back of the head are a little bit odd at a base level, though. I think the angle of the ridge of the nose from the side is a little bit too vertical, and the brow maybe a bit too high/sharp instead of a soft curve. Eyes are still a bit too far apart, they should be one…
PROGRESS! So after taking a third look at all the advice here, and matching it up with some different reference, I think I am moving in the right direction. I'm sure there are a lot of things wrong that I still don't see yet, but what I'm seeing right now is that the eyes and nose are the main culprits, and need some work…
Thank you for the critiques! Very helpful. I took another look at all my reference as well as my sculpt, with your critiques in mind, and took another crack at it. The tips about the nose and eyebrow ridge made a huge difference, as well as the shape of the eyes needing some work. You're absolutely right about the second…