So I'm definitely not a character artist or any good judge of anatomy, but I would revisit the facial anatomy. The bone structure seems exaggerated to the point of almost being alien, especially in the lighting you have. If you'd rather focus on pushing the character further then I'd suggest adding some detail to his…
I'm a character artist! /butts in Excuse me sir, I'm a professional! I CAN DO IT! /trips over foot /gets back up /brushes off jacket Ahem, yeah you gotta revist that facial anatomy, there are weird landmarks ocurring where they should not be. Can you post what your sculpt looks like. Also, what are you rendering in? I…