I like the face a lot but there are some things regarding to anime style that could be better. In general anime is well known for being too exageraed but very VERY simplistic. For instance the nose is usually represented by a single line or a pretty small curve. For womens they tend to have wide hips and are very thin and…
Her eyes feel a bit too far to the edges of her skull, even for anime. Probably also quite a bit too low. http://www.hazardousarts.com/Miku_Tutorial.pdf <- this might be helpful :)
Great start! On top of the other crits I would bring the upper bridge of the nose in a bit to give it more of a "ski jump" shape in profile (very common profile shape in most anime styles). I would also push back her lower lip and chin a bit to give her jaw more of a natural overbite. Other than that it's looking good.…
Trying to apply your advices, I did some small change on the head. I hope it looks better : maybe i shouldn't have push the hair down and I think I was to shy when raising the eyes. (forgot the fov was enable for this. The value is around 10 or so if I remember correctly) I want to try to put some color variation for the…
Her eyes feel like they're set a bit low on the head. They're probably consistent with the typical simplified anime character design, but I think on a more realistic 3d model like this, they might work better if they were placed a smidgen higher.