Oh look at that. I thought it was going to be something to do with the softness of the eyes but that change to the nose completely eliminated the "muzz-face" look. Out of genuine curiosity what are the proportions of your own face? Does the "muzz-face" actually match the Muzz Face?
Good pickup! New rule, ever face needs a readable expresson. So i think i pinpointed another problem here, I am drawing the face in comparison to the features as too big, slimming down the face, seems to be the right move. I can try and do a tutorial i guess, but i don't draw these at all in the same way, i don't have a…
I don't have time atm but at first glance a lot of the faces seem elongated. This could be problems with perspective and anatomy. (shapes of the mouths and angles of the eyes, etc). Sorry! I would like to get deeper into this because I have the "same face" problem as well but gotta finish the riot contest.
Muzz, I'm stoked to see this progress, and you're doing great. For me, just one thing is sticking out on the face, and it's that her nose is quite squished back onto her face? It's very small and flat, I feel like for all her freckle-y charm she should have something a bit "cuter" and pointed-- but at the very least it…
I've been doing a ton of studies recently. It's been helping, but i think it's going to take some active analisis to get rid of this as i need to activley unlearn bad habits. http://i.imgur.com/5As7eFk.jpg http://i.imgur.com/aYSVN5k.jpg I haven't been posting them all up though. The problems persist regardless of how i…
Yeah that is interesting. I always found that myself and many of my friends unconsciously draw our own faces to a certain degree. That doesn't seem to be your issue though... I'm not sure I'm going to be a lot of help on this one...
Making solid progress i think... Really trying to focus on the face, make it more attractive. I'm really shooting for illustration quality for this, using it as an excuse for working on the rendering. I've tried to incorporate as much feedback as possible here.
Nice Improvement man. Ok, so i have something that i need to be absolutely drilled on. I have made progress latley, but it's really slow and i really need a kick in the ass. And that is drawing faces. In my group of artists I talk to regularly, the faces i draw actually has a name, "Muzz Face" as in something about how I…
Also Zberry, that's not bad. I think the face is getting skewed a bit to the left and losing the perspective that is being implied by the top of the head and other features. I also think your nose needs some work, and that chin and the cheekbones could use some finesse. Here's a picture.