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Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
Ok crit time. @ M4rt3 - Good start. Be careful with the muscles he has a decent amount of body fat so his muscle definition is rather soft. Also I think you have his shoulders up too high. @ damir_boz - The hands are too small. Also the nose looks a bit wide. Looking nice otherwise. @ CLo - Drop your subdivison levels and… -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
@ elfronza - you just don't want so many overlapping folds. Since the geometry is overlapping it makes it quite difficult to get in the and actually get the retopo and bake right. Here is a good example of what you want pants too look like. Note the are a lot of fold, but none of them actually overlap. -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
@polymator Feels his nose a tad too long, and his cheekbones really drawing attention to themselves too much. @Brandon.LaFrance Thanks. I will work more on and triple check his facial features first thing tomorrow. // Really like what you got there. Love his cheekbones the sides of his nose. Made this yesterday but forgot… -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
Polymator - Good work on the face dude, the forms are pretty good :) I think the eyes and brow could do with a bit more shaping (even though its blockout,) in the concept they're a little sadder and more arced upwards near the nose while on your sculpt they're more downwards giving him a more of a stern look (in the… -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
Wow, fantastic work guys. @dimfist: Love that face. I don't know why though but the hands feel a little soft to me..but they angle in the image isn't good to judge either so..it could just be me seeing things. @bacn: fingers and palm look stretched out a bit. Like the color palette you got going though! @polymator: Amazing… -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
Good job there renato.medeiros But there a few anatomy issues that you need to keep note on your next character model. 1) The triceps have alot of polishing. there a strange bump in the inner side. 2) The brachioradialis is way too protruding out. 3) The pectoralis major is lacking some volume. Thus making your chest look… -
Re: The Monthly 'Newb' CHARACTER Challenge | April 2014 | Man n Monkey
Thanks for the crits guys. Here's an update on teh face. I'll be moving on to the body now but I'm sure I'll continue to noodle on the face throughout the process. @Torch Thanks man I hope he has more of that dreary/forlorn look this time @M4rt3 You're right about sculpting the moustache but it was just there to help me…
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