I agree with Tobbo on how to link the images. But onto the scene. The modeling looks clean but it seems like the textures some more detail. I think I have seen that vent texture on a certain texture website. Maybe modify it a little more? Make it look like its part of the mesh. Keep it up!
Thanks for the comments. Yeah concerning the image posting I did realize after writing the post that it was not working as I intended. I will use the methods you guys mentioned. @fatalfrost thanks for the comments. I do need to work on the textures more even though my reference was kinda of a clean setup (took the screen…