I think the new face is looking a bit better, but be careful about the forms or it's going to start to look masculine. I think you're spending a needless amount of time on the eyebrows. You should try just sculpting them directly on the face like you did in earlier iterations, except make them thinner and more subtle. Look…
Hi man, looking better for sure, good update! One thing I would recommend checking out is 3Dsk if you haven't already, they have some pretty good shots of people (although I'm guessing you already have, its pretty well known.) The cloth is coming along, the sleeves could use a bit of tweaking as I think they're still kinda…