The vertical streaks seem really arbitrary. I'd expect them to be concentrated under the overhangs - the text, the coin slot, etc. The bottom rust spot makes a degree of sense, but those in the middle feel rather random. The bricks are much too small, and could really use a normal map.
It looks good so far, but try tracing that font in photoshop 1to1, it is extremely important to convey the right mood. Fonts transport a lot of character, and the brain is trained to react a lot stronger to text than images (2-3x). It does not feel right to me (also the kerning of the Z is really off) Im not really good…
Hi Shrike, thanks for your comment. Yeah i will make the wall better, bigger bricks and add a normal map. I was searching for a Font which is similar to the font on the reference. And this is what i get at the moment. Maybe i will find a better one. The whole scene is still WIP Want to add a garbage can, some cartons/boxes…