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Re: Cover Letter Critique Request: Art Production Intern Telltale Games
I can't say to much about the content but letter is a bit wordy. For example the first "I am writing to express my interest in..." could easily be "I am interested in". Another example of cutting things shorter. This: "A commitment to utilizing the interactive medium to bring life to amazing worlds is an ideal that I have… -
Re: Cover Letter Critique Request: Art Production Intern Telltale Games
The fact that your applying for the position must say you feel you have the skills. If that is the case then I wouldn't worry about competition. Be yourself and show your skills and what you can do. You can't change the "competition" but you can put your best forward and differentiate yourself. Also remember your basically… -
Re: Cover Letter Critique Request: Art Production Intern Telltale Games
Be careful about overwriting something and sounding robotic, I don't have much experience writing covering letters but I know if I was reading one I would want it to feel like it represented the persons personality. Currently it feels like something written by a government minister. Here is a quick break down of how I… -
Re: Cover Letter Critique Request: Art Production Intern Telltale Games
to be honest it sounds like there is a little too much ball sucking in there hahaha. Any time I see someone writing like that like they need to desperatley impress it makes me question their confidence that they deserve the postion. I would try to smooth it out a bit to be slightly more casual, right now its super stiff…
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