Thank you very much! This was exactly the kind of feedback I was hoping for! I will try out each one of your suggestions and see how it looks. At least as soon as I find some time for it - my winter break just ended, gotta do real world stuff again... =)
I've been wanting to respond to this post ALL day. Postmortems jazz me up, and this is 100% effective way to make your next piece kick ass. First and formoste, I want to prefice this with "no one knows the workshop formula." I've talked to alot of people aboutthis, and there is a huge thread about what drives the workshop,…