lol she looks cute xD you did a good job. Love the straw hat ^^ The only thing that feels odd to me is that the hat seems too shiny for a straw hat. Maybe could tone down the specularity?
I'd make the shadows slightly warmer on the head. At the moment they look near-black, maybe fake some bounce light, as if there's a tiny bit of light coming through the straw hat? They usually don't block light as well as a "solid" hat would. Maybe add a few more polys to the ribbon on the hat too to smooth it out a bit?…
Some texture work! Been spending some time on the face and the hat. Just started with the cardigan. It's badly tiled right now so that will be the next thing to fix :)