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[Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
Hi all, First time asking for feedback on here for my portfolio! So I've finally graduating and I'm currently looking for a job! My portfolio can be found by clicking HERE I'm looking for feedback on how to make it more attractive and how to make myself look more employable! I've emailed about 30 companies already but with… -
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The text to the left of the portfolio pieces is cropped even in full-screen on my laptop. Move the important stuff (i.e. your name and title) to a banner at the top of the site and drop the rest. "Hello, my name is.." is only important when followed immediately by "Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die." The… -
Re: [Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
So in some of your weaker scenes, you have a tendency to produce milky lighting and atmosphere that blows out the scene. Try to think about your foreground, midground, and background. Some of shots everything just seems muddled. Also try to think about your light sources. How intense are there, where are they placed, and… -
Re: [Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
I totally get what you're saying, and you're spot on. My intention was never to steal assets from other people though; I always thought I'd included my acknowledgements on the site, but I obviously didn't. They're there now. The only reason I included this project was because it was created for my dissertation and I did… -
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Robiq has got to go. Not only is it your leading piece (which suggests the one you think is best and it's not) it's filled with art from other people with no credit. You clearly have assets from Tor Frick's one texture scene blatantly copied over. And even your modular wall pieces are the exact replica of Philip… -
Re: [Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
Overall its pretty decent, there are many things to improve but I dont want to go into detail. I would pump another mesh like you shotgun, (Which is looking good) Get something detailed and well done and well presentated as addition to show off your modeling skills A company has an art director to fix your lighting and… -
Re: [Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
Also I would like discourage you from using videos. just give multi screen shots. A lot of people I know who are in the industry say "don't use videos". just use stills. You want the people looking at you to get in and out as fast as possible. -
Re: [Portfolio] Nathan B - Aspiring Environment Artist
Like EvanL it's very easy to spot it
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