I don't think you're too far away from the design, not with the hood anyway. Maybe try to add some ocean themed things on shoulder maybe. But I like the design overall it's very cool^^
Hello, I do troll around on the boards but I logged in after a long time just to tell you that you should definitely work on that deer courier you had concept for. Also, I dig Juggernaut set, particularly the one with the hood on. Horns seem out of place IMO. Cheers, Bhargav.