thanks guys for the feed back and I do agree with you guys, i need to fix the 180 rule that I break. my teacher told me that same thing, as for the pitch and script, it has no script, I was trying to make it a opening for a game or a game trailer
I agree with the 16:9 aspect ratio. I'm also in agreement with jStines with the continuity. You're breaking the "180 degree rule" when the camera goes to the other side of the character. If you want to go to the other side you need a mid shot where you neutralize your 180 degree line so the next shot you can establish a…