I don't know how to better explain this, but something looks off with the crotch area in the front picture.. Almost like its too low. This may just be a mirage of the perspective view you have, and the bulky pants with the coat overhang. I would almost say push the hue more. The pants with that lime you have on now seems…
very, very cool work, not oversexed, yet clearly feminine. The clothing is great, very natural and well done - if you would want to push it further i would add a tiny bit of chaos, pre wrinkled surfaces that keep the landmarks of former folding, like in her bag, in a cabinet or something like this. But i like the style as…